Reflection:
I it was tricky to get ideas from a picture book
I am proud that I got good ideas
Next I will make another story by a picture book
I it was tricky to get ideas from a picture book
I am proud that I got good ideas
Next I will make another story by a picture book
2 comments:
You have some wonderful ideas and used great descriptive vocabulary to write an imaginative story. Your illustrations are really clever which made reading your story enjoyable. You are using punctuation correctly. Well done! Next time work on the ending of your story by adding lots of details so the reader is sure about how the characters feel at the end.
Wonderful effort with your story writing Mohammed. You have used the illustration of the book Mrs K brought to school, very well.
Next time you can work on your editing skills so everything looks and does make sense.
Miss H
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